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falls on deaf ears
blue stream
the difference
significant
unseen
what does it mean?
only faith
in self
else there is nothing left
when no sound
is heard
when the world
falls on deaf ears
we know
the bold move to make
shifting
causing rafters
to break
the wreckage will quake
go on
and persevere
if fearing is seeing
a line is crossed
go will
and then in silence
the world
stands still.
Instinct
is smarter than you think.
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KodokuNoNana Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012   General Artist
Great job!
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Angelles-LaVeau Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Well done.
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Writer
=) I think it came out really well. The staggering of the words make it jagged to read, but that also makes it interesting as well. Nicely done!
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BonnieWoodson Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the way this flows :wow:
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valleigh Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Writer
very well done, I love the way you write, I think you write a lot like me, i think is nice, keep up the good work
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SteveDashO Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
this is unbelievably easy for me to relate. . .uncanny, keep up the great works :D
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a great poem. Well done, sweetheart. :star:
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Leaveit2Lauren Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It came out very well :)
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