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your soul is an acoustic
black and white picture
movie reel
captive sunlight
never yielding to release
giving shadows a new taste
of elegance, quiescent
the tranquil luminescence
that can trap a heart
in the photographic emulsion
or celluloid undertow
of slow motion
just as flammable
as a subtle combustion
kindling a rustic tongue
to move a languid expulsion
ladened with sorrows
carried like crystal shards
in a humble sun catcher
hung above a familiar window
prizing inconsequential matter
into flecks of golden dust
reminiscent of
beauty and
love~
:sun: :music: Music video I was watching when I got the idea to write this: [link]

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Update 12/12/12... Oh my that's alot of 12's! My second DLD Feature! [link] :iconlawooplz:
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acoustic is, for me, a definite inclusion in my list of up and coming works. Well done, I feel proud reading this.

Its soft, its subtle, its poignant, and the best part is.... Its lukewarm; its like someone has a guitar banging in the back of the room, there's turmoil and personal grudges pouring out, while the man is making sense out of this madness - and doing it like a man, at that.

This is inspiring stuff, and no doubt will remain one of those critiques I haply look forward to reconsidering every time I read this work. Well done!
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
The words you use look so beautiful together: tranquil luminescence, subtle combustion, anguid expulsion... 

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Beautiful work! I love the language and the imagery especially!
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Januairie Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Congratulations on the DLD! :huggle:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
CONGRATS ON THE MUCH DESERVED DLD! :iconexcitedlaplz:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012   General Artist
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! :love: A DLD for you the following day! :heart: :heart: :heart:
Congratulations, sweetheart! You already know how much I adore this piece! :tighthug:
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